Plan
-Finn gutted that he still hasn’t found a princess of his own.
-Jake (being the best friend) tries to find ways to cheer him up by taking him on an adventure.
-Finn is not so keen, questioning why they always go on adventures
-Jake ends up convincing him to go, by saying he has a surprise (there is no surprise)
-Ends up at a desert and they’re lost
-Jake is put on the spot and admits there was no surprise
-Finn gutted that he still hasn’t found a princess of his own.
-Jake (being the best friend) tries to find ways to cheer him up by taking him on an adventure.
-Finn is not so keen, questioning why they always go on adventures
-Jake ends up convincing him to go, by saying he has a surprise (there is no surprise)
-Ends up at a desert and they’re lost
-Jake is put on the spot and admits there was no surprise
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- Finn gets mad and storms off and they go separate ways
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- Finn goes back to find jake but is then told by the friendly coconuts on the palm
trees that he was taken by some lemon dude(earl of lemongrab) (to be confirmed)
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- “LemonGrab!!!!”
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- Finn is searching around the desert for help
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- Finds the oasis kingdom with just Princess Oasis and her squire Reece
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- Finn falls in love with her (as he does with pretty much every princess)
-She is infatuated with him because she is the first human she’s ever seen
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- Asks for help saving jake
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- She is wants to help. She command the warriors of the dunes to rise up and help
finn.
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- Finn leads them to lemongrab and fight the enemy
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- Finn fights The Earl in an epic sword battle in the castle of lemongrab while jake
is in a cage in the hall they are fighting
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- He defeats Lemongrab and frees jake.
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- the city of lemon grab now technically belongs to Finn
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- the dune people swear an oath to finn and are now his loyal soldiers
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- princess oasis and reece control the sand dunes to lift up the oasis kingdom the
the city of lemon grab and it is now in the centre of lemongrab
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- princess oasis and finn become king and queen of the Lemongrab Kingdom
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- oh yea and Jake was saved.
Which episode is this looking at? I would be interested to see your take on it next to the actual episode.
ReplyDeleteThe structure of your story is outlined very clearly here, and Finn's motivation to save his friend Jake works well in driving the plot forward. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteI like how you've given a typically very unstructed programme a driven plot. It would have been easy to get carried away with embellishments and sub plots but I think it will work really well!
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