Ollie Maharaj-Booth's draft so far.

“What’s the point.  I put my life on the line countless times for her.  I have travelled far and wide, completed every quest, killed every beast and still my love for Princess Bubblegum is unrequited.  There is no point”.

To most people, it was another ordinary day in the land of Ooo.  The birds were chirping, the worms were squirming and the sun was burping.  You would expect Finn and Jake to be out in the world looking for adventures, but this day was no ordinary day.  The human boy fin, for the first time in his life, had given up.  After years of being in love with Princess Bubblegum, Finn finally found the courage to tell her the night before that he was in love her.  Princess Bubblegum only saw Finn as a friend, this caused Finn to fall into a dark abyss that is impossible to get out of, Finn was cast into the Friend Zone.

 Finn’s dog, Jake, knew Finn was feeling down and thought he’d try and cheer him up, “cheer up man!  I hate to see you like this, lets go some where fun!”  Jake said.  Finn slowly sat up in his bed, turned to Jake and simply said “no”.  “No!? what do you mean no?  We have grown up together in this tree house and not once have I ever heard you say the word no!  We’re going on an adventure!”  Jake said.  Finn hesitated, he didn’t want to ruin Jake’s day by being in a bad mood, so he rolled out of bed onto the floor and continued to roll until he ended up at Jake’s feet and said, “this better be worth my time”.  Jake had nothing up his sleeve, he had no idea how to get Finn excited, so he had to lie, “don’t worry man!  I have a surprise for you, you’re gonna love it!”

After Finn and Jake had a hearty breakfast consisting of flapjacks and Toblerone, they set off to the surprise.  They headed towards the Desolate Desert of Ooo,  I forgotten land where Finn and Jake had normally stayed away from, simply because it was too hot for a dog.  There was an awkward silence on the way to the desert, simply because Jake had no idea what to say.

-Finn gutted that he still hasn’t found a princess of his own.

-Jake (being the best friend) tries to find ways to cheer him up by taking him on an adventure.

-Finn is not so keen, questioning why they always go on adventures

-Jake ends up convincing him to go, by saying he has a surprise (there is no surprise)

-Ends up at a desert and they’re lost

-Jake is put on the spot and admits there was no surprise

• Finn gets mad and storms off and they go separate ways
• Finn goes back to find jake but is then told by the friendly coconuts on the palm trees that he was taken by some lemon dude(earl of lemongrab) (to be confirmed)
• “LemonGrab!!!!”
• Finn is searching around the desert for help
• Finds the oasis kingdom with just Princess Oasis and her squire Reece
• Finn falls in love with her (as he does with pretty much every princess)

-She is infatuated with him because she is the first human she’s ever seen

• Asks for help saving jake
• She is wants to help.  She command the warriors of the dunes to rise up and help finn.
• Finn leads them to lemongrab and fight the enemy
• Finn fights The Earl in an epic sword battle in the castle of lemongrab while jake is in a cage in the hall they are fighting
• He defeats Lemongrab and frees jake.
• the city of lemon grab now technically belongs to Finn
• the dune people swear an oath to finn and are now his loyal soldiers
• princess oasis and reece control the sand dunes to lift up the oasis kingdom the the city of lemon grab and it is now in the centre of lemongrab
• princess oasis and finn become king and queen of the Lemongrab Kingdom
• oh yea and Jake was saved.